Dear authors,
in your revised version and the corresponding author response you have addressed most referee comments in a satisfying way. Referee#2 has re-evaluated the revised version and requests some remaining minor and technical corrections (see his report). Please consider them duly.
In addition, I also have some minor comments to be addressed before the manuscript is ready for publication. They are listed below.
Best regards
Christof Ammann
AMT Associate Editor

EDITOR COMMENTS

1) In the previous review, referee#3 placed the following comment:
"My only broader comment is in relation to the connection between the flow and the temperature variability; the connection between these two values needs to be better supported; there are places where it appears that the two variables are used interchangeably and it can lead to a little confusion for the reader."
This comment has not been addressed in the auther's reponse. Please do so now.
(One exemple for the issue is on page 17, line 10)

2) page 2, line 9: omit "respectively"; change "it is recognised" to "it has been recognised"

3) page 6, line 18: clarify to "...time series for both parameters."

4) page 12, line 18: change to "The bulk of ..."
page 12, line 19: change to "...and the DTS system..."

5) page 16, line 3: omit "For comparison". (It is misleading here).
page 16, line 6: change to "As shown above, DTS and 3D sonic temperature measurements showed ..."

6) page 18, line 1: change to "two-dimensional"

Dear Authors,
you have addressed all remaining comments in a satisfactory way, and the manuscript is now ready for publication. Please check the following two small language issues before you submit the final version.

p4, line 27+28: The word "range" is used here in a misleading way. I suggest to replace it by "...30 m spatial resolution..." in line 27 and by "...data from 75 m to 9585 m distance ..." in line 28

p9, Fig.1 caption (first line): remove the hyphen between "1" and "sigma". It may be interpreted as a minus sign.

Best regards
Christof Ammann
AMT Associate Editor


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