Articles | Volume 18, issue 21
https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-18-6449-2025
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The saturation vapor pressures of higher-order polyethylene glycols and achieving a wide calibration range for volatility measurements by FIGAERO-CIMS
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General Comments
This study addresses the important challenge of calibrating the FIGAERO-CIMS instrument for measuring the volatility of organic aerosol (OA) constituents, particularly for extremely low-volatility compounds (ELVOCs). Current calibrations typically rely on polyethylene glycols (PEGs) up to PEG-9, which limits the lower end of the volatility range. The authors extend this range by including PEGs up to PEG-15, thereby significantly improving calibration coverage.
The experiments are thoroughly conducted, with desorption temperatures (Tmax) carefully measured and reported. The authors also compare a comprehensive range of methods for estimating the vapor pressure (C*) of PEGs. The experimental results, vapor pressure estimates, as well as the discussion, provide valuable insights—not only for FIGAERO-CIMS users but also for the broader community using thermal desorption-based volatility measurements.
I strongly recommend the manuscript for publication, but I have a few comments and suggestions for clarification and improvement:
Specific Comments
(1) The conclusion regarding the linearity between C* and PEG number is somewhat misleading. A linear relationship should not be expected, and in fact, non-linear behavior is well documented in various parameterizations (e.g., L2016, S2018, M2019 in this study). In addition, different conformers of the same PEG molecule can exhibit varying intermolecular interactions, leading to different saturation concentrations. This is actually illustrated in Figure 1: the best-performing estimation methods (desorption model, COSMO-RS, MGM) show that C* values for larger PEGs tend to be non-linear and above the dashed line, contrasting with other parameterization methods.
Instead, the relationship between C* and the measured Tmax is more direct. In Figure 2, when considering the uncertainties in C* (as shown in Figure 1), the linear fit is not significantly worse than other fits. Furthermore, it is somewhat confusing that the Tmax values in Figures 1 and 2 are taken from two measurements (presumably A and B?), but C* from the desorption model is the averaged value from A, B, and C. Would it not be better to use the average T_max from all three measurements (A, B, and C) for consistency? Also, I am curious about the uncertainty of Tmax, which is not clearly mentioned.
(2) Please clarify whether the reported mass loading refers to individual compounds or the total mass, and maybe more important which one is more essential or more related to Tmax. It is unclear whether low mass loading (< 105 ng) could influence Tmax. If this is a potential factor, it should be discussed.
Technical Comments
Line 21: It’s unclear where the "150 °C" value comes from. This is described more clearly in Lines 75–76. Please ensure consistency across the manuscript.
Line 35: Instead of "now-known," consider using "best-estimated" for clarity and specificity.
Line 77: The sentence suggests methods were used to improve measurement accuracy. It would be more accurate to say that different methods were used to improve the prediction of vapor pressures.
Line 159: Remove "experimental".
Figure S1: It is unclear how the uncertainties for the magenta crosses were derived. The legend notes that the yellow crosses represent the model fits of C* (rather than ΔH) to experiments.