Articles | Volume 18, issue 23
https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-18-7231-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
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Development and use of a lightweight sampling system for height-selective UAV-based measurements of organic aerosol particles
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AR by Thorsten Hoffmann on behalf of the Authors (20 May 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (20 May 2025) by Francis Pope
RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (21 May 2025)
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (03 Jul 2025) by Francis Pope
AR by Thorsten Hoffmann on behalf of the Authors (12 Aug 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (20 Aug 2025) by Francis Pope
RR by Anonymous Referee #4 (21 Aug 2025)
ED: Publish as is (21 Aug 2025) by Francis Pope
AR by Thorsten Hoffmann on behalf of the Authors (27 Aug 2025)
Manuscript
The authors describe a lightweight UAV system for measuring organic aerosol particles and present first vertical measurements from a rural area in southern Germany. The paper is well written and fits within the scope of AMT. However, there are some problems that need to be corrected before the manuscript can be published.
Major comments
Introduction
Why does the paper only mention vertical profile measurements? UAVs are particularly suited for horizontal measurements, which supply the benefit of scanning areas and understanding emission sources (see literature).
Experimental procedures
Have you studied the turbulence of the rotor? Most groups working on aerosol sampling with UAVs use smog experiments to make turbulence visible. The position of your setup is given in the appendix. However, the pictures don't show the dimensions. Please add these dimensions to the pictures or provide a sketch with the dimensions. This is especially important for the distance between the instrument and the rotors. Since the results are very impressive and the effect of turbulence can obviously be neglected, the question is why. After all, the body of the UAV acts as a kind of shield and allows a shielding flow around the UAV? A colored smog test would show this.
Figure 1 shows a schematic of the filter holder. Again, the dimensions are missing. How long is the filter holder? What is the length and diameter of the pump? What is the diameter of the pump inlet? What is the distance from the filter to the pump inlet?
Have you determined the deposition characteristics of your filter holder? What are the diameters of the particles (size range) being filtered? Have you determined the total number of particles you are filtering per volume? What are the particle concentrations in number and mass?
Other parameters that are missing are the down wash distribution, the rotor speed, and the weight of the sampling unit.
Can you open and close the inlet to your filter assembly or can you turn the pump on and off during the flight to ensure that you are sampling only from the appropriate altitude?
Electronic circuits and the schematic structure of the measuring unit are also missing. If software was used for the control system, this must also be specified in the appendix.
Results and Conclusions
The manuscript presents an impressive proof of concept. The results are robust and in line with expectations for the measurement situation. However, more information on the setup is needed to evaluate the errors.
Minor comment
“UAV” is the common term. You could use "UAV" instead of "drone".