Articles | Volume 19, issue 4
https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-19-1201-2026
© Author(s) 2026. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Enhancing dust aerosols monitoring capabilities across North Africa and the Middle East using the A-Train satellite constellation
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-888', Anonymous Referee #1, 08 Apr 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Anna Moustaka, 10 Jul 2025
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RC2: 'Review of egusphere-2025-888', Anonymous Referee #2, 16 Apr 2025
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AR by Anna Moustaka on behalf of the Authors (12 Jul 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (02 Feb 2026) by Ilias Fountoulakis
AR by Anna Moustaka on behalf of the Authors (08 Feb 2026)
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General comments:
This manuscript presents an important contribution to the field of aerosol remote sensing by enhancing the estimation of dust lidar ratios (LRs) through a synergistic use of multiple satellite datasets (CALIOP, MODIS/MIDAS, and POLDER-3/GRASP). The research primarily addresses a critical limitation in the CALIPSO dust retrieval algorithm—the use of a fixed dust lidar ratio (LR) of 44 sr.
The effort to improve the accuracy of CALIOP-derived Dust Optical Depth (DOD) in North Africa and the Middle East is commendable and of clear relevance to both the scientific community and stakeholders.
A noteworthy contribution of the study is the clear demonstration that regional variability in dust properties necessitates the use of spatially and seasonally resolved LR values. The analysis reveals that higher LR values are required over North Africa (~53 sr), while lower values (~37 sr) are more appropriate for the Middle East. These adjustments lead to measurable improvements in DOD retrievals, particularly in regions like the Bodélé Depression and the western Sahara, which are known for intense dust activity.
The authors further validate their findings against AERONET sun-photometer measurements, reporting substantial reductions in both Mean Bias Error (MBE) and Root Mean Square Error (RMSE). Seasonal analysis also reveals strong correspondence between revised LR values and observed dust activity patterns, highlighting the method's robustness across varying climatic conditions.
While the methodology is generally robust and the findings are well-supported, I would like to offer several constructive observations that may help refine the study and guide future work as follows.
1. Although the improved dust LRs clearly lead to enhanced agreement with satellite and ground-based AOD measurements, the broader implications for climate modeling and radiative forcing are not fully explored. A quantitative analysis of the impact on surface energy budgets, direct radiative effects, or global dust forcing would elevate the study’s significance, therefore I suggest to write a statement for future work related to this.
2. The authors reference the relevance of their results for upcoming missions (e.g., EarthCARE) and future algorithm updates (CALIPSO v5). While promising, the manuscript does not provide a detailed roadmap for how the improved LRs will be operationally integrated. Outlining a pathway or collaboration with mission teams could enhance the practical value of the study.
In conclusion this work represents a valuable contribution to aerosol remote sensing, offering practical improvements to satellite dust retrievals in one of the most important source regions globally. Addressing the aforementioned limitations in future research would not only strengthen the current findings but also broaden the applicability of the proposed methodology across other regions and satellite missions.
Specific comments
Page 7 in paragraph 220-please provide a reference for the interpolation procedure to derive AOD at 532nm.
Figure 3-page 11- the shades of red/purple are very close and not easily distinguishable-please choose contrasting colors.
Figure 4 page 14 – in caption for the correlation factor, better use “R”.
Page 15 line 398 -I think could be useful to write in here when you refer to Figure S1 and S2 to specify that they could be found in the supplement material.
Figure 8 page 21- Very difficult to follow all information in panels a and b; too much information; For me it could be much better if you put on separate panels the graphs related to annual/seasonal.The shades of red and brown for me are very confusing- difficult to distinguish; I would change brown with a different color-maybe black or grey.
Line 500- when you refer to depolarisation thresholds are you referring that the value is set for 0.28 for dust? In general when reading the word “thresholds” I would look for an interval between max and min values. Please clarify.
Line 510 Add respectively after “derived from the CALIOP-POLDER-3/GRASP and CALIOP-MIDAS synergies”.
Line 514- I have noticed you have used the word “departure” several times when you refer to the difference between two values- not sure if it is correctly used- please check with an English speaker.
Lines 528-529- “Within the zone of high DODs, the two peaks are more distinguishable when the new LRs have been calculated from the collocated CALIOP-MIDAS sample on a seasonal basis.” I do not agree with this statement. That area looks very similar in the 2 cases. At least is not \'more distinguishable\' for me.
Figure 11- Again, I have difficulties to distinguish red and brown curves.