Exploration of machine learning methods for the classification of infrared limb spectra of polar stratospheric clouds

Sedona, Rocco; Hoffmann, Lars; Spang, Reinhold; Cavallaro, Gabriele; Griessbach, Sabine; Höpfner, Michael; Book, Matthias; Riedel, Morris

doi:https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-13-3661-2020

AMT | Articles | Volume 13, issue 7

Atmos. Meas. Tech., 13, 3661–3682, 2020
https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-13-3661-2020
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Research article 08 Jul 2020

Research article | 08 Jul 2020

Exploration of machine learning methods for the classification of infrared limb spectra of polar stratospheric clouds

Rocco Sedona et al.

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AR by Svenja Lange on behalf of the Authors (27 Apr 2020) Author's response

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The authors have clearly adressed the revisions and improved the manuscript. The following points should be clarified prior to publication:

1.19 sentence should be revisited: denitrification and heterogenous activation both affect ozone loss but are different things
2.19 Voigt et al. (2018) use airborne remote sensing, which does not fall in the categories in situ or microwave
8.13ff More explanation is required for Fig 2. Should the reader focus on rows/columns, or the diagonal? or maximum values only? What about the "W" features? They are missing in the discussion and labels
8.14f 820-840 cm-1 region is discussed already in previous sentence; what about the very strong feature at BT index ca. 10?
9.2 R3 seems relatively important and R5 unimportant, both opposite to Fig. 2a. Should this be discussed? Could this explain the better performance of RF?
9.10 BT indices should be provided for the 790 and 1235 cm features to allow locating these features in Fig. 2
11.10 In the seasonal analysis, only the classes sts, ice and nat are shown. Does this mean that also mixtures containing sts are summarized as "sts" etc.? Is "nat_sts" counted as both "nat" and "sts", thus both in Fig 10a and 12a?
11.30 A recent study indicates that large aspherical "beta-NAT" particles can be discriminated in ir spectra (Woiwode et al., 2019). Are the methods
used here sensitive to such particles?
12.11ff Which part of the subsequent section belongs to Fig 15. and which to Fig. 16? Is Fig. 16 discussed at all? The discussion is short for 2 figures including 6 panels in total
12.13 "almost all" seems too strong
12.16 Do percentages in text refer to y-axes in Fig. 15? "nat_small" seems red >80%, while the text says "around 50 % and 60 %". Some explanation is required on how percentages given in the text are related to the figures

References:
Woiwode et al., Geophys Res. Lett., 46, 13,420–13,429, 2019

Technical
3.1 "((" and "))"
7.31 numbers of figures should be ordered according to appearance in text; "pipeline" Fig 4 = Fig 2?
15.6 2010â€“2011
Fig 2 suggest to move "R" labels to middle of respective windows; otherwise one may get the impression that R1 etc are lines only; increments of y and x-axis should be identical
Fig 4 2x"radianCES"; explain "f.e."
Fig 5 grey/dark grey shading should be labelled or defined in caption
Fig 15,16 define N

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ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (15 Jun 2020) by Christian von Savigny

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