Articles | Volume 18, issue 15
https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-18-3635-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Seasonal effects in the application of the MOment MAtching (MOMA) remote calibration tool to outdoor PM2.5 air sensors
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-3454', Anonymous Referee #1, 08 Jan 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2024-3454', Anonymous Referee #2, 06 Mar 2025
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AR by Lena Weissert on behalf of the Authors (16 Apr 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (15 May 2025) by Albert Presto
AR by Lena Weissert on behalf of the Authors (19 May 2025)
Line 35-38: Based on your statement, I’m curious about how the correction process is applied. If the 3-day rolling average triggers a correction after exceeding the threshold for 4 consecutive days, would the correction only apply to data collected from Day 4 onward, or would it retroactively adjust the data for Days 1, 2, and 3 as well?
Line 111: Could you clarify whether the speciation data is collected every third day? If so, does this limit the number of days labeled as "Dust" that actually have corresponding speciation data? Given that dust events are short-lived, does the speciation data reveal any significant differences in crustal composition between days labeled as “Dust” and “Urban”? In Figure 4, the comparison of crustal composition shows little difference between the means for Dust and Urban. Could this be influenced by the disparity in the number of days analyzed (20 Dust days vs. ~600 Urban days)?
Lines 103–106 state: “The reference network consisted of 1 Beta Attenuation Monitor (BAM) at the Phoenix JLG Supersite and 8 dichotomous Taper Element Oscillating Microbalance (TEOM) monitors.” Does this mean that the Phoenix JLG Supersite has both BAM and a TEOM monitor?
Line 107-108: The authors mention: “For comparison, we also used hourly PM2.5 reference data from a reference-grade optical instrument – T640x (Teledyne API, San Diego, U.S.), which was deployed at West Phoenix from November 2018 until April 2021.” Could you clarify what specific comparison the authors are referring to in this context?"
Line 119 – 121: If multiple proxy sites are equidistant from a specific PurpleAir sensor, which one did the authors choose for comparison? Were there instances where these two proxy sites showed different concentrations?
Line 128: Please specify what does MV stands for?
Line 128: Please check if “E – variance, var (MV)” should be “E, variance, var”?
Line 139-141: The author mentions: “The impact of this threshold was tested using Purple Air data from South Phoenix, West Phoenix, and Durango and calibrating these against the nearest proxy reference, to represent the impact of calibrating against a distant proxy reference.” Are the authors emphasizing that these sites had collocated sensors, but the calibration was still performed using the nearest proxy reference?
Line 161: About RH, is the PurpleAir sensor reported relative humidity or meteorological data?
Line 168: Please correct “between smoke and dust and general urban traffic PM sources” to “between smoke, dust, and general urban traffic PM sources”
Figure 2: Please specify if it is 3-day rolling MOMA gain daily average.
Line 194-195: The authors mention that “The difference between the PurpleAir sensor and the reference data varies diurnally over winter with the largest differences observed at nighttime.” Since diurnal data is not presented in the manuscript, please clarify where this information is derived from.
Figure 4: Were the species concentrations normalized by the maximum concentration? Could you please specify how the normalization was performed?
Figure 4: Did the remaining ~600 days (between July 2019 and April 2021, excluding 20+18 for Smoke and Dust) contribute to Urban days?
Figure 4: Please provide the range of PM10 concentrations from the regulatory monitor for the marked "Dust" days. A low PM2.5 /PM10 ratio does not necessarily indicate high absolute PM10 (observed during Dust events). For example, PM10 concentrations below 50 µg/m³ can also result in low PM2.5/PM10 ratios.
General comment: Should the authors accept as a limitation that their method does not allow real-time correction, unlike the EPA's method that uses the PurpleAir parameter for real-time data correction?